This is an example of what our writing this week
I wasn’t sure what was in the box. I had to see for myself. There was no moon in the sky. It was almost pitch black but all I could see was a dim light coming from around the corner of a dark street. The attraction of the light drew my attention closer and closer to it. I was getting goosebumps as I got closer. I was about to open it when I heard quiet voices telling me not to. I finally opened it when it revealed nothing to be shown in it. My curiostiy just came to an end.
I love how you used lots of describing words!
ReplyDeleteGood use of different sentence types! I would have liked to see more writing.
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