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Friday, 2 December 2016

Writing

This is an example of what our writing this week
   I wasn’t sure what was in the box. I had to see for myself. There was no moon in the sky. It was almost pitch black but all I could see was a dim light coming from around the corner of a dark street. The attraction of the light drew my attention closer and closer to it. I was getting goosebumps as I got closer. I was about to open it when I heard quiet voices telling me not to. I finally opened it when it revealed nothing to be shown in it. My curiostiy just came to an end.

2 comments:

  1. I love how you used lots of describing words!

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  2. Good use of different sentence types! I would have liked to see more writing.

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